Review: Black Moon

Black Moon – The Moon Triology Part 1

C.L. Bevill

From Amazon:
Donovan is a werejaguar sworn to fight against his enemies, the dreaded werewolf clan - the Whitelaws. Isabella is an uncommon librarian, a member of the Committee. When she faces down the Whitelaws to retrieve a very dangerous book, she encounters Donovan and their lives will never be the same.




I got this book for free and what caught my eye was the title – the moon is very special to me – and the warning that the book was for adults.

I read my first erotic short story when I was 13 and the genre got my interest. It is a hard genre to succeed in. Almost everyone has an opinion and a lot also experience in the area. Writing about a so very physical experience and succeed is to be admired when someone proves to be a master.

The story’s erotic side does work. From the very beginning the tension between the two characters is clear. The erotic part of the story ends, in my opinion, in an anticlimax it is over before it really happens.

The story is very short. This to me is just prove that a story doesn’t need five hundred pages to be great. You just need to use your pages well.

The story follows Isabella and Donovan as the only character. Others do pass by, but the reader doesn’t get to know any of them. The characters have what is needed for this short story – the question is if it will be enough for the two last books as well.

The main genre is urban fantasy which has been in for quit some years. The fight between clanes of supernatural’s is no new theme, but it doesn’t pull down this story.

I felled entertained and I am sure I will read the other two books in the triology in the near future.

The Story 

**** 

Characters 

*** 

Originality 

*** 

Total 

**** 

* No, no, no...

** A bit bad

*** Not rally good, not really bad

**** A good experience

***** ....No words... ...Mind blowing...